00:03yeah I'm just on my lunch break really one second girl can I help you one second I'm
00:20gonna have to call you back mm-hmm yes do it okay bye girl
00:35one more time mm-hmm no I'm on my lunch break you had all day to ask me this is
00:45my
00:46only time to eat if you want me to look over your paper you're gonna have to
01:00wait I'm gonna finish my food I have some grades to enter and then maybe I can
01:07help you you can sit
01:37okay
01:55so which paper are we talking about hmm okay for history class
02:08I don't grade other teachers assignments just the grammar let me call up miss
02:22Lindsay let me ask her if that's allowed and then maybe I can check grammar and
02:28spelling and that right okay
02:45why aren't you outside it's a nice day
02:51okay let's do tomorrow
02:54now what do we say about doing things at the last moment
03:04okay just this once and only if miss Lindsay says it's okay
03:18hey miss Lindsay how are ya mm-hmm I have one of your students here asking if I can check
03:29your final paper for grammar mistakes
03:34mm-hmm mm-hmm yeah not content just grammar I think it's okay
03:45okay yeah yeah oh Rob is great it's doing good I'll catch up sometime okay all right bye
03:57so lucky for you miss Lindsay is okay with it let me just finish and then I'll get right to
04:04your paper
04:20did you eat no
04:25no
04:35no
04:36oh
04:36okay
04:36no
04:36no
04:36no
04:36no
04:36no
04:49okay
05:05I'm gonna get a piece of gum and then I will help
05:42Okay, I should leave
05:51All right, hand it over.
05:57I can already see that this is not double-spaced.
06:05That's your first problem.
06:07We always double-space.
06:10It hurts our eyes.
06:11When you get older, we'll understand.
06:14Okay?
06:15I'm gonna get my papers together.
06:32Okay.
06:41What format is your citations in?
06:48And that's your first mistake.
06:51You have to have parentheses, last name, date.
07:07Are you gonna get something to eat after this?
07:12Honey, no.
07:13You need to eat.
07:15You need to eat lunch.
07:20The cafeteria doesn't close for 30 minutes.
07:23I'll be done in 10, 15, if that.
07:26Go get some lunch.
07:28You sure you don't want a candy?
07:32Okay.
07:33Okay.
07:40So, I'm not supposed to grade content, but the 21st century is now honey.
07:48So, what does that make the 20th century?
07:52Exactly.
07:54Exactly.
07:58Exactly.
08:01Exactly.
08:03Exactly.
08:03Exactly.
08:03Exactly.
08:03Exactly.
08:06Exactly.
08:18Okay.
08:19Okay.
08:19Okay.
08:19Well, the first degree that I would try now is to put this one on the grid.
08:31Oh, you know what, honey?
08:33I have an orange.
08:36Do you want it?
08:37Yeah, just one of those cute little baby oranges.
08:43Yep.
08:44We can split it, okay?
08:54So, if you're working so hard on Miss Lindsay's paper, how do we feel about my paper that's due in
09:01a week?
09:06I have not started it.
09:10You're telling me, you're in here, having me grade a paper when you haven't even finished my paper, somebody else's
09:21paper.
09:28On my lunch break.
09:31Well, here.
09:39Come on, eat it.
09:41I don't have a problem with it, as long as you can get it on my desk on time.
09:50Okay.
09:52I'm going to write a note here.
09:57And I want you to follow this format for all of your citations.
10:08I want you to follow this format for all of your citations.
10:09Okay, good.
10:12Here.
10:14Website.
10:20Do you have at least one book reference?
10:24One reference from the internet?
10:28No, Wikipedia does not count.
10:33I don't know why.
10:35It's just a rule.
10:36You can't.
10:38Honey, if you're writing an academic paper in college and you cite Wikipedia, it's over.
10:46That's just the way it is.
10:50Find a new source.
10:56Wikipedia has sources.
10:58Go back to Wikipedia.
11:00Find where you got your fact.
11:02This one here.
11:05Find where they got it from.
11:08Cite that.
11:26Hold up one second, sweetie.
11:28I'm getting a call.
11:33Hello.
11:34This is Miss Vinkenhagen.
11:38Oh, this is Megan's parents, right?
11:43How are you?
11:47Great.
11:49Yeah, I was just phoning earlier because
11:55we're having a few problems with her falling asleep in class.
11:59I just wanted to reach out to see if everything's okay.
12:06Yeah, multiple times now.
12:13Her grades are suffering because of it.
12:16She's missing some critical information.
12:28Well, you know, academics take priority over athletics.
12:36I see.
12:37I see.
12:37Well, then I will talk to Coach Johnson.
12:42Okay.
12:43I see.
12:47Can I get a better contact number from you?
12:54Or six, six, six.
12:59Got it.
13:00Okay.
13:01Well, I'll talk with her again.
13:06Yeah, I know.
13:07I know being a student-athlete is hard.
13:12I understand.
13:14Okay.
13:15You too.
13:17Bye-bye.
13:24Bye-bye.
13:26All right.
13:28Where was I?
13:34I just want you to know
13:36that this is very hard to read, being single-spaced.
13:41Next time, double-space this paper next week for me,
13:44if it's not double-spaced.
13:52Okay.
14:04What is this word?
14:22you see this taken for granite honey it's not a rock granted
14:37how are your other classes going by the way
14:42i do like the initiative you're showing even though it's my lunch break i like your initiative
14:48let me tell you something about college
14:52office hours office hours office hours if you go to a professor's office hours you will be on their
15:02good side trust me they want people to come to their office hours that's the only way you'll
15:10build a relationship with them if you want to go to grad school that's how you get recommendation letters
15:18have you decided what school you're going to
15:24not yet it's perfectly fine you have a while
15:40you know at least this is an interesting topic
15:45sometimes i read papers don't tell anyone this but sometimes i'll read papers that are so boring
15:54i can't stand grading them
15:58this is interesting
16:06i don't think that's how you spell that but i'm gonna check
16:40but i can't make sure that i don't know so
16:46very close but no
16:58overall very good very nice very good work
17:11all right see here we need to mind our passive voice the object is not in control of the
17:19sentence the person doing the action is not the object being acted on see here can you tell me
17:28what's wrong with that exactly I'm gonna write another note on her sticky note okay
18:20my brooch my husband gave it to me isn't it cute
18:26frogs are my favorite animal
18:29I couldn't tell from the classroom decor
18:32all right
19:00all right looks good
19:05so what I think you should do is go to the cafeteria get some lunch and then after school take
19:1515 minutes 15 minutes go to the library fix these errors
19:22print it off and be done mm-hmm
19:24don't put it off don't do it at two in the morning
19:33what do you mean you're forbidden from the library
19:40are you serious
19:47okay well I will send an email to the librarian and ask her to make an exception
20:02when did this happen that's not that long ago
20:11he might not let you but I'll ask
20:13that's not that long ago
20:26one second
20:28one second
20:28one second
20:30one second
20:30one second
20:32one second
20:49you're still good on time
20:51don't rush me
21:06okay I sent it I don't know what you'll say I will tell you if she replies before the end
21:12of the day
21:16worst case come to my classroom you can use one of my desktops and print it out
21:25hmm no it's okay but I need you to finish my paper on time okay my class is just as
21:33important as
21:34miss Lindsay's just because it's English and you want to what was it what degree did you want to
21:42yeah that's what I thought English is just as important did you like your orange
22:00yeah I love those little things okay well
22:11here is your paperback
22:15look it over let me know if you have any questions yes right now
22:24miss Lindsay is not going to read a report find an error and think that I missed something okay
22:33thank you let's not forget you're on my lunch break
23:19so
23:20that I think much is enough I didn't get it
23:22I have several sndic cards available in the marasite
23:25I'm going to get a little bit better.
23:34Maybe you'd be better a menstrual
23:37when you're going to come into class.
24:04are we done no questions
24:11okay well I hope we get a good grade okay I'm going to finish my lunch go eat
24:19something I'm serious okay all right honey
24:40you
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