Dorothy 7 Feb

Name: Dorothy 7 Feb
Uploaded: 2013-02-08T06:46:51+00:00
Duration: 3 min 51 s
Channel: bonvillainf
Description: Hi Roddy, Please critique. I'm delivering my story more smootly, and now have it under 4 minutes. Please advise what else you think I can take out & still maintain the integrity of the story. Genuine thanks for your guidance.....blessings, Dorothy

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Hi Roddy,  Please critique.  I'm delivering my story more smootly, and now have it under 4 minutes. Please advise what else you think I can take out & still maintain the integrity of the story.   Genuine thanks for your guidance.....blessings, Dorothy

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