Find the best financial services for you at: SMARTFINANCESOLUTIONS.NET - How's this rap verse? - He just didn't get it, rap was suppose to be rhythmic and poetic What the hell was he doing? his gimmick was pathetic See, all the fans were booing, They saw his lyrics were synthetic Someone shoulda got the defibrillator, this mans bars needed a medic! And you know he's about to blow up when his eyes start twitching But, could he overpower the sold out crowd, and their arts of b*tching? They all didn't think so, to all the guys, he was just another joke He was getting killed on this stage, life passed before him Nose smothered with coc, sufferin being broke, disonnected with his folks He trembled looked around, feelin as he was about to croak Then he awoke, coughed a little and spoke The crowd started laughing thinkin' he was gonna choke But, he ignored them and started perfectly demonstrating The guys passion was goin' off the charts, was escalating Turning this whole show into a bomb, was detonating Every note he had, he was calm, was penetrating Dude was sheer fire, he was growing, was elevating
Then it goes to a chorus, then the next verse is about him messing up and landing him no where, ending up in the streets after bankruptcy, third verse is about a redemption kinda story.
