I’m moving slowly through this shadowy, concrete cafeteria, my weapon raised. Sunlight slants through the high windows, cutting through the dust in the air and casting long beams across the room. My target is just ahead, unaware of my presence. Every step has to be quiet—one wrong move and the whole mission could go sideways. I’m closing in, ready to take the shot before they even know I’m here.
Do you want me to also rewrite this in a more cinematic, story-driven style?
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