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00:00I thought you loved me
00:02I'm telling you, Tony, it was the longest flight of my life
00:06No, yeah, I've been literally dreaming about taking my bra for six hours
00:09I'll talk to you tomorrow, love you, bye!
00:19Whoa! Shit!
00:21What are you, oh my god, why are you in my room?
00:24I'm sorry, your brother said that I could change in your room before soccer practice
00:28No, I mean, yes, I mean, I'm home, but that's fine, I'm all yours
00:34My room is all yours
00:36Ok, I'm sorry, that's fine
00:40Sorry, that's fine
00:43You good?
00:57In
00:58Yeah, yeah.
01:02Hi.
01:10I missed you, kid.
01:12It's the whole summer abroad.
01:16You look different.
01:19Oh, well, probably too much gelato.
01:22My hair's probably greasy from the plane still.
01:25No, not like that. You look good.
01:37Henley, what the fuck?
01:39You're home already?
01:41I thought you got back tomorrow.
01:43Tomorrow's the first day of school, idiot.
01:47Oh, shit, Hen.
01:49Maybe you want to cover up?
01:51I don't really feel like spending my senior year fighting a bunch of creeps off my little sister.
01:57That's very funny. Nice to see you too, big bro.
02:00At least I got backup.
02:01Mm-hmm.
02:02Look, we got a split for practice, but we can talk later, yeah?
02:10Oh, Mom's gone for a business trip. Surprise, surprise. So?
02:13Chinese for dinner?
02:15Cool. Hurry up, Luca.
02:35Okay, hottie with a body.
02:37Who is she and what has she done with my best friend?
02:40Haha, very funny.
02:42I'm serious.
02:43It only works some magic for you, girl.
02:46More like Summer I turned sexy.
02:49People are staring.
02:51Probably. I forgot to brush my hair this morning.
02:57Damn.
02:58You're not the only one with a glow up.
03:01Since when did Austin Baines become a man?
03:08Down, boy.
03:10What? He's hot.
03:12Maybe you'll finally get some action at your brother's party tonight.
03:15You know, it is about time you had your first kiss.
03:19All that smutch you read and still nothing.
03:22Nothing.
03:23Okay.
03:24One, it's romanticy.
03:25Two, it's research for my own writing.
03:27And three,
03:29Shut up.
03:31Okay, I'll see you later.
03:32Bye.
03:52Bye.
04:15Okay, no more Miss Wallflower.
04:19You finally got it.
04:20It's time to flaunt it.
04:21Come on, it's fine.
04:23I've already accepted my fate as virgin nerd, okay?
04:25I don't need you.
04:26Yes, you do.
04:28How else are you supposed to write Fan Manessy or whatever without some experience?
04:33You're now hot.
04:34Which means according to the rules of high school, you're now powerful.
04:38Use that power for some good, huh?
04:40Uh-huh.
04:56So who's the lucky guy?
04:58Take your pick.
04:59Well, yesterday, Luca was-
05:00Well, yesterday, Luca was-
05:02No.
05:03Not Luca.
05:04Anyone but Luca.
05:05What?
05:06Fuck you!
05:09What, I'm hot, but I'm not hot enough for Luca?
05:12It's not you.
05:13It's him.
05:14Girl, you have got to get over this crush.
05:17He's your brother's best friend.
05:18He's-
05:19Okay, but maybe it's different this time.
05:21Yesterday, he literally said, you look good.
05:24Wow.
05:25No.
05:26Y-you're right.
05:27I mean, he basically asked you to be his girlfriend.
05:31I hate to burst your bubble, but Luca doesn't date girls.
05:35He just fucks them.
05:37He's a psycho playboy, and everyone knows that, except you.
05:41He is not a psycho-
05:49Playboy.
05:51Hey, there are greener pastures than man-whore Luca.
05:54Okay.
06:02Incoming.
06:03Go get him, Tiger.
06:07Hey.
06:08Hey.
06:09You're Will's little sister, right?
06:11How'd you know?
06:12Please don't say family resemblance.
06:15Austin.
06:16Henley.
06:17You look like you could use a drink, Henley.
06:21Oh, my brother, he's right over there.
06:25Maybe our little secret.
06:34No.
06:35It's all yours.
06:36I insist.
06:38Well, I guess chivalry isn't dead, huh?
06:40Not on my watch.
06:41Excuse me.
06:42Luca, what the fuck?
06:48Bit aggressive, don't you think?
06:52Excuse me?
06:54Soccer practice earlier, your tackle.
06:56I mean, I know you're new to varsity and you might have something to prove, but you might want to ease up a bit, huh?
07:01You want to go get yourself a soda, kid? Or do you want me to get Will over here?
07:14Thanks for the drink.
07:16Anytime.
07:17What the fuck, man?
07:18Why are you cock blocking me?
07:19He's serious.
07:20She's a fucking kid.
07:21Open your eyes.
07:22She's clearly not a kid anymore.
07:23Stay away from her.
07:24Oh, I see.
07:25You want a piece too, huh?
07:26That's fine.
07:27I'm not afraid of some competition.
07:28May the best man win.
07:29Okay.
07:30Easy, killer.
07:31Why don't we go upstairs?
07:32I'll let you take some of that aggression out on me.
07:34Okay.
07:35Good.
07:36Good.
07:37Good.
07:38Good.
07:39Good.
07:40Good.
07:41Good.
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08:24Good.
08:25Good.
08:26Good.
08:27Good.
08:28Good.
08:29Jacob just texted me.
08:30He's got the place to himself.
08:32So, ciao.
08:37Hey, look on the bright side.
08:41At least one of us is getting laid.
08:59I'm sorry.
09:01Oh, what the fuck?
09:02Hey.
09:03Bitch, don't you knock.
09:08Hey, yo, hey, hey.
09:29Henley?
09:30It's fine.
09:31I'm just, um, I think I'm partying out.
09:33I'm just going to, um, write for a little bit.
09:45Henley, look at me.
09:50I'm sorry you saw that.
09:52It's fine.
09:53I'm fine.
09:57You don't seem fine.
09:59I get it.
10:02I mean, it's like walking in on your brother.
10:07Which would make me your sister.
10:13No, it, it, it's, it's different.
10:17It's just, I, I, I care about you.
10:21Hen.
10:23You know that.
10:29I need you to stay away from Austin.
10:46I know him.
10:47And I know how he treats girls.
10:51It says the guy that was just dry-humping Aranda in my bathroom.
10:54Henley.
10:56Never mind.
10:57Just, good night, Luca.
10:59I think.
11:19I get the feeling it's a good night.
11:22Hey, Bookworm.
11:31Hey.
11:34The Vampire King's Beloved.
11:37Huh.
11:38Sounds hot.
11:40It's not.
11:42I mean, it is.
11:44Definitely.
11:45But there's more to it.
11:48I'd love to write like her.
11:49Not just handjobs and alpha males.
11:53You're funny.
11:56Maybe I could read your writing sometime.
12:00Yeah, maybe.
12:04You know, I really liked talking to you last night.
12:08There's just one problem.
12:11I didn't get to give you a goodnight kiss.
12:19Here?
12:20Like now?
12:22Better late than ever, yeah?
12:27Are you fucking kidding me, Baines?
12:29Will?
12:29Luca?
12:30What the hell?
12:31Get your fucking hands off me, you psycho.
12:33You were warned to stay away from my sister.
12:35Stop it.
12:35He didn't do anything.
12:37Not yet, I didn't.
12:38What are you worried?
12:39I'm going to beat you to the finish line.
12:40Don't worry.
12:41You can have my sloppy seconds.
12:43Piece of shit.
12:46Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey.
12:47Fucking hell, man.
12:48Chill.
12:50You're on probation.
12:51If Coach finds out you got another fight, he'll kill you.
12:54What the hell is the matter with you?
12:56Leave me alone, Luca.
13:04Hey, come on.
13:06Hey, hey, hey.
13:06I'm sorry.
13:07I'm sorry, okay?
13:08I got out of control, but I'm just, I'm trying to protect you, kid.
13:11Stop calling me that.
13:13I am not a kid anymore.
13:14And I don't need your protection, okay, Luca?
13:16Austin's a nice guy.
13:18And now you ruined it.
13:18He isn't, okay?
13:19I told you.
13:21Ruin what?
13:25My first kiss.
13:29Okay?
13:30I thought maybe finally, but no.
13:33You had to go and punch him in the face.
13:35Wait.
13:38You've never had your first kiss?
13:48We can't.
13:57Your brother, I...
13:59I can't do this.
14:01We can't do this.
14:02I can't.
14:02Don't you ever go home?
14:31Yeah.
14:34Well, uh, it's not so nice ever since the divorce, so...
14:39Shit, I'm sorry.
14:40I, I wasn't thinking.
14:42It's fine.
14:45Not your problem.
14:58You know you're not getting your back.
14:59I got it.
15:10Excuse me.
15:10Come on.
15:12Come on.
15:12Come on.
15:12Come on.
15:26Come on.
15:26Come on.
15:27Come on.
15:31so when are you gonna let me read one of your stories negative come on you always let me read
15:52them when we were kids i'm sure you loved that huh i did love it
16:01you know you've always been really talented and
16:12well i don't think you'd like this anyway it's not your kind of writing it's you know romance
16:20so there's like sex and stuff
16:27why wouldn't i like that
16:31i'm sorry i ruined your first kiss
16:44but i pricked her to deserve it
16:48so who does deserve it then you
16:51absolutely not i'm a psycho remember
17:03when we fight i'm off the team
17:04i know you lucca and you're not a psycho
17:16look i'm gonna have my first kiss okay
17:21you can't stop me
17:24so you might as well you know give it to me
17:27your brother's my best friend
17:39he doesn't have to know
17:40if we do this there has to be rules
17:52okay
17:57well number one
18:00i make the rules
18:00rule number two nobody finds out especially well
18:12and rule number three no more austin and no other boys
18:18i don't want anyone else touching you
18:22you understand
18:23i understand
18:32this for research right
18:36research
18:36you know for research sake i think we should maybe try a little more
18:55yeah
19:00yo
19:04hey man
19:06what are you doing here
19:07he came to apologize
19:09i was uh i was looking for you and henry and i wanted to say i was sorry about yesterday so
19:16i'm sorry about yesterday thanks
19:24okay we gotta work on your anger management issues bro you get your ass suspended again
19:29we lose our best midfielder
19:32now come on party at danny's he invited all those girls from saint monica's over
19:36you know they gotta be desperate
19:39time's a-wasting let go
19:46i thought you'd be at danny's with some desperate catholic schoolgirl on your lap
20:10i left it was boring besides i was wanting to check in on you
20:17i want to see how you're doing after today
20:21well actually
20:24there's this one scene i'm writing i'm stuck on
20:30i think there's a few other things i want to try out
20:34that wasn't part of the deal
20:37you want someone else to do it for me
20:40look at you
20:42you know what you're doing don't you
20:44i told you i'm not a kid anymore
20:50okay
20:50i shouldn't i want to
21:03do
21:04i don't i want to
21:05go
21:14wait
21:28Is that what you like?
21:38Is that what you needed?
21:42Use your words then.
21:47Can we have sex?
21:50What, now?
21:56I don't want to rush this.
21:58I want to take my time.
22:03I want to make it right for you.
22:06But...
22:07I make the rules.
22:11Remember?
22:14It's just a little bit longer, kid.
22:19You're a writer.
22:22You know the build-ups have the fun.
22:24That's my girl.
22:30That's my girl.
22:30It's a little bit longer.
22:31I don't know.
22:31Now...
22:36I'mHow's this?
22:37You are a writer.
22:38I don't know.
22:39I don't know.
22:39so i heard about your little library incident cannot believe that psycho gave austin a bloody
23:02nose don't call him that come on you don't know anything about him i know he's got the record for
23:07the most red cards in the school league i know he got suspended for breaking some dude's jaw at prom
23:13last year you don't know everything about him when we were younger he actually came and lived
23:18with us for a while i would get these nightmares luca would come sleep on my floor promise he'd
23:27protect me that he'd never let anything hurt me all right so he's not a psycho
23:38unfortunately still a playboy
23:48oh look luca you have a stalker oh no i wasn't i bet she has a little crush
23:54how cute shut up ellie i mean i don't blame her but he's taken honey hands off get the
24:03fuck off me ellie jesus christ i told you we're not together
24:10you okay peachy hey like i've been saying fuck luca
24:20well don't fuck luca fuck austin but i'm not just gonna go fuck austin can you stop screaming austin
24:27say someone say my name why don't i give you two lovebirds a minute
24:38hey hey i've been looking everywhere for you yeah here i am here you are austin i am
24:47so sorry about what luca and my idiot brother did to you it's inexcusable no no it's okay it's okay
24:54really it's not that bad plus it gives me some street cred
24:58yeah yeah everyone's talking about what a badass you are yeah that's what i thought so
25:04i actually owe you an apology i came on way too strong in the library
25:07i just really like you i couldn't help myself but i want to do this right can i take you out oh um
25:29i'll think about it
25:32okay
25:37yo luca i'll be back in an hour peace bro hey hey
25:54what are you doing
26:01what did i say
26:02okay no more austin oh fuck off luca i think i have a role no ellie no other girls at all
26:16not here
26:36wait i don't want to hurt you i'm not scared of you luca
26:42uh
26:56uh
27:02uh
27:06uh
27:08uh
27:10Oh, my God.
27:40I'm sure.
27:42I want you to be my first.
27:52That was...
27:54incredible.
27:55I mean, I knew it would be.
27:57From what I read about it.
27:59It's different in Bloodbound, obviously, because he's a vampire king.
28:07Yeah, of course.
28:10You know...
28:14When you were living with us, and I got to be around you all the time,
28:21it was the happiest I've ever been.
28:25And I know that's fucked up, because it was probably really bad for you.
28:29It wasn't all that bad.
28:30I had you and your stories, so...
28:35Yo!
28:42Luca!
28:43Yo, you in there?
28:53Motherfucker.
28:55What the fuck is going on here?
28:56Okay, well, let's just...
28:57Why don't we just...
28:57My sister?
28:59What the hell is wrong with you?
29:00I trusted you, Luca.
29:02I trusted you, and this is what you do with my trust?
29:05Will, you don't understand.
29:06Stay out of it, Henley!
29:07Stay out of it.
29:08This is my life.
29:09Well, that's just...
29:10You were supposed to help me protect her.
29:12Not go and fuck her yourself!
29:15This whole fucking time, I thought you were my brother.
29:17And all you really wanted was my little sister?
29:21Fuck you.
29:22Piece of shit.
29:27Get out.
29:29Just get out.
29:31Fuck out of here, Luca!
29:33We're done!
29:33I care about her, okay?
29:35Yeah?
29:35Didn't I just see you with your tongue down Ellie's throat two weeks ago at my party?
29:39That was different.
29:40That was then.
29:41Okay, okay, fine.
29:42You care about her?
29:44If you care about her, Luca, leave her the fuck alone!
29:47You think you're good enough for her?
29:49You're not!
29:50You think you won't hurt her?
29:51You will!
29:52It's who you are!
29:54You're fucked up, you're violent, and you're selfish.
29:58And I need you to stay the fuck away from my little sister!
30:01Luca, wait!
30:06Yeah.
30:07Yeah, Luca?
30:09Do it.
30:10Do it!
30:11Show her who you really are!
30:17Don't!
30:19Luca, I'm sorry.
30:20I didn't mean for it to end up...
30:22You got what you wanted.
30:23Didn't you?
30:25What?
30:26What are you talking about?
30:27For your book.
30:30What, I show you the ropes and now my job's done, right?
30:35We could just go back to everything being normal.
30:36Why are you being like this?
30:40I thought that you cared.
30:41What did you think was gonna happen, huh?
30:43Did you think we were gonna date?
30:46You were my best friend's little sister.
30:50That's it.
30:56We're done.
30:56I tried to tell you, once a playboy, always a playboy.
31:13Right?
31:13I should've known you'd never go for a girl like me.
31:15I should've known you'd never go for a girl like me.
31:17Babe, what did I tell you?
31:19You're beautiful, and funny, and talented, and you deserve better.
31:23If he doesn't see that, someone else will.
31:24And I, for one, am not going to let you accept the fate of a virgin nerd, even if only for
31:40the sake of your future smut, let me tell you something, the best way to get over someone
31:46is to get under someone else.
31:50I think it's time to give Austin a chance.
31:52Put Luca in your rear view, once and for all.
31:58Okay?
32:10Hey, I thought about your offer.
32:24I like sushi.
32:27It's my lucky day, huh?
32:30How about I pick you up Saturday?
32:32Around noon?
32:34See you then.
32:40What the?
32:52What are you wearing?
32:54I bet you are not dad.
32:59Henley, you back here?
33:02Hey.
33:03Hey, you made it.
33:05Long time no see.
33:06Oh, hell no.
33:08Stop.
33:09You're my brother, not my keeper, okay?
33:11It's my bad, man.
33:12I should have talked to you before I made any kind of move.
33:15It was disrespectful, and I'm sorry.
33:17But I really like your sister.
33:20I mean, I'm not going to ask for permission or anything, but it'd be great to have your blessing.
33:26And these are for you.
33:30Oh, that's very sweet.
33:35She's allergic.
33:36The flowers?
33:40That's what I said.
33:44Don't make me regret this.
33:45That was great.
34:01You literally said that you like sushi.
34:04Okay, but it's because it's a cool girl thing to say.
34:06What was I supposed to say?
34:07I love Olive Garden.
34:08Well, yeah.
34:09Anything that you like is a cool girl thing to like because you're a cool girl.
34:13Yeah, because spending Friday nights in the library has made me very cool.
34:20Well, thank you for a very gross date.
34:24I hope to never eat raw fish ever again.
34:28Maybe I can make it up to you.
34:31You're beautiful, you know?
34:32I've wanted to do this since the moment I saw you.
34:46It's worth the wait.
34:52Yeah.
34:53Yeah.
34:54Yeah.
34:55Definitely.
35:00Well, thanks again.
35:03Yeah.
35:04I'll see you around.
35:06See ya.
35:07I'll see you around.
35:31So?
35:32I need to kick his ass?
35:33It was good.
35:38Yeah.
35:39Great.
35:49Look, Henley, I know I'm not that.
35:53But with him gone, I'm just trying to look out for you.
35:59Protect you.
36:00You know, as kids, whenever you got hurt, I felt like I got hurt too.
36:10Felt like I let you down.
36:12Like, like I should have stopped it.
36:17I still feel that way.
36:18But you're old enough to make your own decisions.
36:28So?
36:30Do you like him?
36:35I do.
36:35I do.
36:39Well, I guess that's that.
36:53Shih!
36:53See?
36:54See?
36:54Hi, baby.
37:21Baby.
37:22Fucking hell, Ellie.
37:23Can you just...
37:24Just leave me alone.
37:28Okay, I am really over this.
37:34I get that you're sad about Will or whatever,
37:38but you haven't fucked me in, like, a month,
37:40and I'm sorry, but your girl has needs.
37:45Just go find someone else.
37:48I don't give a shit.
37:49You're fucking kidding me.
38:05Her.
38:07The fucking nerd.
38:08Jesus, Luca, that is low.
38:13Even for you.
38:16No wonder Will hates you.
38:17I don't know.
38:28Shit.
38:30Fucking no way, man.
38:31I need to talk to you.
38:33Now.
38:34Absolutely not.
38:35It's fine.
38:35Just give us a sec.
38:36Look, I meant what I said.
38:45I don't want you hanging around him.
38:48You think you get a say?
38:49Really?
38:50You don't know what he's like.
38:52The things that he says about you.
38:54He's nice to me, okay?
38:56He takes me out.
38:57He bought me flowers.
38:58Yeah, you're allergic.
39:00He doesn't treat me like some little kid.
39:02He doesn't give a shit about you.
39:05He just wants to fuck you and leave.
39:07That's what he's like.
39:08That's what he said at the library.
39:09That's why I hit him.
39:10He's like...
39:10Sounds like someone else I know.
39:13All right, man.
39:14It's time you leave my girlfriend alone.
39:18You gotta believe me, kid.
39:23Goodbye, Luca.
39:24You know about this?
39:34You see how that asshole treats your sister?
39:37At least he didn't stab me in the back.
39:41My sister is none of your business.
39:44Got it?
39:46Bring it in, fellas!
39:47I know it's just a crush.
39:59Crush.
40:01Crush.
40:02I know it's just a crush.
40:07Crush.
40:09Crush.
40:09I know it's just a crush.
40:10I know it's just a crush.
40:11I know it's just a crush.
40:15But I always read way too much and just stop.
40:20I feel like what I feel is real.
40:23But fuck, I'm such a drama queen.
40:26I know it's just a crush.
40:28Crush.
40:30I know it's just a crush.
40:42Get angry.
40:44Hey.
40:47Hey.
40:48easy tiger i've missed you yeah since an hour ago i mean i've been thinking about you like crazy
41:05yeah
41:07why don't we go back into the stacks for some privacy
41:13oh well i'm actually i'm working right now i just cracked this new chapter okay but this
41:23can wait i can't come on
41:27so i was thinking maybe you could read a couple of the pages i wrote i really like them are you
41:50seriously thinking about that right now i was kind of hoping i had your full attention
41:55no you do i just um you said a couple weeks ago that you wanted to read them so i
42:01and i will just not right now okay
42:05okay
42:07okay that's about as far as i'm willing to go with a librarian in the room
42:20come on it'll be just like that shit you write
42:22it's not shit and i said no god damn it henley
42:26what do i have to do huh
42:28i'm sorry i'm sorry i just i like you a lot and i know i've only known you for a few
42:38weeks but i feel like i feel like i'm falling in love with you
42:42you don't you don't even know me
42:50yes i do
42:52austin i don't think that this is gonna work out
42:56you're a fucking tease huh
42:59excuse me i mean i thought this would be easy
43:04girls like you are always grateful for a little attention
43:08fuck you i mean you come back from summer vacation half a cup size bigger and you think it makes you hot
43:14shit it doesn't
43:17well i am so sorry to have wasted your time
43:21uh-uh you're not getting way that easy
43:26get off me
43:28you heard her
43:29get off
43:31she was mine first man
43:38wait your turn
43:39you piece of shit
43:41there he is
43:43the killer
43:44no
43:47that'd be me
43:49holy shit
43:53ow
43:53kid
43:54good shot
43:56i learned from the best
43:58let's get you out of here
44:00don't you ever touch her again
44:03yeah fine
44:05yeah you two belong together
44:07fucking psychos
44:10you okay
44:25next time
44:27remind me i'm a lover not a fighter
44:30you know i didn't mean what i said
44:35after
44:36you're more than me than just will's sister
44:42you're everything
44:49i thought
44:52i thought you didn't think of me like that
44:55of course i do
44:57henley i love you
45:03i loved you since i was 10 years old and i moved in down the hall
45:08since you first begged me to push you on the tire swing and
45:13read me one of your stories
45:15since you held my hand
45:20after one of your nightmares
45:22and you looked at me like i was
45:27only person in the world
45:30it's always been you
45:37why did you push me away then
45:44because i'm fucked up
45:48and
45:49i'm not good for you
45:52yes you are
45:54and when i saw austin on top of you i wanted to kill him
45:59you understand
46:01you should not be around guys
46:04like
46:04but you didn't
46:05you didn't kill him and you still saved me
46:08you saved yourself
46:09i love you too you know
46:16you do
46:20oh my god luca you really think that was just for research
46:24i've always loved you
46:27i missed you
46:36i missed you too
46:38henley
46:48hey
46:52will uh listen to me
46:54i heard about the library
46:56are you okay
46:57yeah mostly
47:01hey man
47:05you were right about allison
47:07thank you
47:09for protecting her
47:11always
47:15well i guess that's that
47:20just
47:21try to keep the pda to a minimum
47:23will you
47:24that seriously
47:27that's it that's your blessing
47:28that's the best you're gonna get sis
47:30if you hurt her
47:32you know what happens
47:34never again
47:35where were we
47:46i want to see some of you writing
47:58you're sure
48:00yeah
48:02yeah
48:03yeah
48:05so
48:22what do you think
48:24you can be honest
48:28i can take it
48:29just tell me
48:31because it's honestly a first draft
48:33and i'm working on it
48:34and
48:35it's really good
48:36you think so
48:38yeah it's really
48:39really good
48:41amazing
48:44i think so too
48:45there's just one thing that
48:48i think you need to work on
48:51what is it
48:54let me show you
48:56is it okay
49:04keep going
49:05i need the inspiration
49:06oh good
49:07yeah
49:07red dragon
49:21record by
49:22short drama free
49:23follow for more
49:37follow me
49:38and
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