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00:01I've been telling you, Con, it was the longest flight of my life.
00:05No, yeah, I've been literally dreaming about taking my bra off for six hours.
00:08I'll talk anymore. I'll love you. Bye.
00:17Whoa!
00:18What are you? Oh my God, why are you in my room?
00:23I'm sorry, your brother said that I could change in your room before sacrobatics
00:27because you were still...
00:28No, I mean, yes. I mean, I'm home, but that's fine. I'm all yours.
00:33It's my room is all yours.
00:55You good? Ben?
00:58Yeah.
01:02Hi.
01:09I missed you, kid. It's...
01:11the whole summer abroad.
01:13You...
01:13You look different.
01:18Oh, well, probably too much gelato.
01:21My hair's probably greasy from the plane still.
01:23No, no, no, not like that. You, you, you, you look good.
01:36Henley, what the fuck?
01:39You're home already?
01:41I, I thought you got back tomorrow.
01:42Tomorrow's the first day of school, idiot.
01:45Yeah.
01:45Ah, shit, Hen.
01:48Maybe you want to cover up?
01:52Don't really feel like spending my senior year fighting a bunch of creeps off my little sister.
01:57It's very funny.
01:58Nice to see you too, big bro.
01:59At least I got back up.
02:01Mm-hmm.
02:02Look, we got a split for practice, um, but we can talk later, yeah?
02:09Oh, mom's gone for a business trip.
02:12Surprise, surprise.
02:13So?
02:14Chinese for dinner?
02:15Cool.
02:15Hurry up, Luca.
02:34Okay, hottie with a body.
02:38Who is she and what has she done with my best friend?
02:40Ha-ha, very funny.
02:42I'm serious.
02:44It only works some magic for you, girl.
02:46More like Summer, I turn sexy.
02:48Ha-ha, people are staring.
02:51Oh, probably.
02:52I forgot to brush my hair this morning.
02:57Damn.
02:58You're not the only one with a glow-up.
03:01Since when did Austin Baines become a man?
03:08Down boy.
03:10What?
03:11He's hot.
03:13Maybe you'll finally get some action at your brother's party tonight.
03:16You know, it is about time you had your first kiss.
03:19All that smudge you read, and still, nothing.
03:23Okay.
03:24One, it's romantic.
03:26Two, it's research for my own writing.
03:28And three, shut up.
03:31Okay, I'll see you later.
03:32Bye.
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04:02Okay. No more Miss Wallflower. You finally got it. It's time to flaunt it.
04:22Han, it's fine. I've already accepted my fate as virgin nerd, okay? I don't need you.
04:26Yes, you do. How else are you supposed to write Fan Manessy or whatever without some experience?
04:33You're now hot, which means according to the rules of high school, you're now powerful.
04:38Use that power for some good, huh?
04:46Go back, let go. There is nothing more for me to show.
04:53So who's the lucky guy? Take your pick.
05:03Well, yesterday Luca was...
05:05No. Not Luca. Anyone but Luca.
05:10But fuck you!
05:13What, I'm hot, but I'm not hot enough for Luca?
05:15It's not you. It's him.
05:17Girl, you have got to get over this crush.
05:20He's your brother's best friend.
05:21Okay, but maybe it's different this time.
05:24Yesterday, he literally said, you look good.
05:27Wow.
05:29You're right. I mean, he basically asked you to be his girlfriend.
05:34I hate to burst your bubble, but Luca doesn't date girls.
05:38He just fucks them.
05:40He's a psycho playboy, and everyone knows that, except you.
05:43He is not a psycho...
05:45Playboy.
05:53Hey, there are greener pastures than man-whore Luca.
05:57Okay?
06:04Incoming.
06:06Go get him, tiger.
06:06Hey.
06:11Hey.
06:12You're Will's little sister, right?
06:15How'd you know?
06:16Please don't say family resemblance.
06:18Austin.
06:20Henley.
06:20You look like you could use a drink, Henley.
06:24Oh, my brother. He's right over there.
06:28Maybe our little secret.
06:29Okay.
06:29No, it's all yours. I insist.
06:41Well, I guess chivalry isn't it, huh?
06:44Not on my watch.
06:45Excuse me.
06:47Luca, what the fuck?
06:51Bit aggressive, don't you think?
06:56Excuse me?
06:56Soccer practice earlier, your tackle.
07:01I mean, I know you're new to varsity, and you might have something to prove, but you might want to ease up a bit, huh?
07:15You want to go get yourself a soda, kid, or do you want me to get Will over here?
07:21Thanks for the drink.
07:23Anytime.
07:26What the fuck, man? Why are you cock-blocking me?
07:32Are you serious?
07:33She's a fucking kid.
07:35Open your eyes. She's clearly not a kid anymore.
07:38Stay away from her.
07:40Oh, I see.
07:42You want a piece, too, huh?
07:45That's fine.
07:46I'm not afraid of some competition.
07:49May the best man win.
07:50Okay.
07:54Easy, killer.
07:55Why don't we go upstairs?
07:57I'll let you take some of that aggression out on me.
07:59Okay.
08:00Okay.
08:01So much for power.
08:27Rome wasn't built in a day.
08:29Yeah, anyway, Jacob just texted me.
08:34He's got the place to himself.
08:36So, ciao.
08:41Hey, look on the bright side.
08:45At least one of us is getting laid.
08:59I'm sorry.
09:06Oh, what the fuck?
09:07Hey.
09:07Bitch, don't you knock.
09:13Hey, yo, hey, hey.
09:14Hey.
09:18Hey.
09:18Hey.
09:19Hey.
09:20Hey.
09:21Hey.
09:22Hey.
09:23Hey.
09:24Hey.
09:25Hey.
09:26Hey.
09:27Hey.
09:28Hey.
09:33Henley?
09:34It's fine.
09:35I'm just, um, I think I've partied out.
09:37I'm just gonna, uh, write for a little bit.
09:50Henley, look at me.
09:51i'm sorry you saw that it's fine i'm fine
09:58you don't seem fine i get it it i mean it's like walking on your brother
10:08which would make me your sister
10:15no it it it's it's different it's just i i i care about you and you know that
10:45i need you to stay away from austin i know him and i know how he treats girls
10:55this is the guy that was just dry humping a rando in my bathroom henley
10:59never mind just good night luca
11:15the vampire king's beloved huh sounds hot
11:45it's not i mean it is definitely but there's more to it i'd love to write like her
11:55not just hand jobs and alpha males you're funny
12:01maybe i could read your writing sometime
12:04yeah maybe you know i really liked talking to you last night there's just one problem
12:14i didn't get to give you a good night kiss
12:23you're here like now better late than ever yeah
12:31are you fucking kidding me baines will luca what the hell get your
12:37eyes off me psycho you were warned to stay away from my sister stop it he didn't do anything
12:42not yet i did it what are you worried i'm gonna beat you to the finish line
12:46don't worry you can have my sloppy seconds piece of
12:49shit hey hey hey fucking hell man chill you're on probation coach finds out you got another fight he'll kill you
13:00what the hell is the matter with you
13:09leave me alone hey hey i'm sorry i'm sorry okay i got out of control but
13:15i'm just i'm trying to protect you okay stop calling me that i am not a kid anymore
13:20and i don't need your protection okay luca austin's a nice guy and no he isn't okay i told you
13:27ruin what
13:31my first kiss
13:35okay i thought maybe finally but no you had to go and punch him in the face wait
13:41you've never had your first kiss
13:59we can't
14:03your brother i i can't do this we can't do this i can't
14:11your brother i can't do this
14:35jesus don't you ever go home
14:37yeah well uh it's not so nice ever since the divorce so
14:45shit i'm sorry i i wasn't thinking it's fine not your problem
15:01you know you're not getting your back i got it
15:16just give it to me come on
15:31so when are you gonna let me read one of your stories
15:39so when are you gonna let me read one of your stories
15:55negative
15:56come on you always let me read them when we were kids
16:00i'm sure you loved that huh i did love it
16:12you know you've always been really talented in
16:19well i don't think you'd like this anyway it's not your kind of writing it's
16:22it's you know romance so there's like sex and stuff
16:33why would i not like that
16:36i'm sorry i ruined your first kiss
16:51but i fucking pricked her to deserve it
16:52so who does deserve it then you
17:02absolutely not
17:06i'm a fucking psycho remember
17:10when we fight i'm off the team
17:11i know you lucca and you're not a psycho
17:23look i'm gonna have my first kiss
17:26okay
17:28you can't stop me
17:31so you might as well you know give it to me
17:35your brother's my best friend
17:46he doesn't have to know
17:55if we do this there has to be rules
18:00okay
18:00rule number one
18:07i make the rules
18:11rule number two nobody finds out
18:14especially well
18:19and rule number three no more austin and no other boys
18:25i don't want anyone else touching you
18:26you understand
18:34i understand
18:39this for research right
18:43research
18:56you know for research sake i think we should maybe try a little more
19:02yeah
19:07yo
19:08sit
19:12hey man
19:13what are you doing here
19:15he came to apologize
19:17i was uh i was looking for you and henley and i wanted to say i was sorry about yesterday so
19:27i'm sorry about yesterday
19:29thanks
19:31okay
19:33we gotta work on your anger management issues bro you get your ass suspended again we lose our best
19:38midfielder
19:40now come on party at danny's he invited all those girls from saint monica's over
19:44you know they gotta be desperate
19:47time's a wasting
19:48let go
19:59I thought you'd be at Danny's with some desperate Catholic schoolgirl on your lap.
20:18I left. It was boring. Besides, I was wanting to check in on you.
20:25I wanted to see how you're doing after today.
20:29Well, actually, there's this one scene I'm writing I'm stuck on.
20:38I think there's a few other things I want to try out.
20:42That wasn't part of the deal.
20:45You want someone else to do it for me?
20:48Look at you. You know what you're doing, don't you?
20:54I told you. I'm not a kid anymore.
20:57Okay. I shouldn't.
21:02I want to.
21:03I don't know.
21:05I don't know.
21:06I'm not a kid.
21:08I'm not a kid.
21:40Is that what you like?
21:47Is that what you needed?
21:51Use your words then.
21:56Can we have sex?
21:59What, now?
22:05I don't want to rush this.
22:08I want to take my time.
22:11I want to make it right for you.
22:14I make the rules.
22:20Remember?
22:22It's just a little bit longer, kid.
22:28You're a writer.
22:30You know the build-ups have the fun.
22:32Hmm, that's my girl.
22:38Hmm, that's my girl.
22:38That's my girl.
22:46I don't know.
22:46Maybe I can die.
22:56so i heard about your little library incident cannot believe that psycho gave austin a bloody
23:11nose don't call him that come on you don't know anything about him i know he's got the record for
23:16the most red cards in the school league i know he got suspended for breaking some dude's jaw at
23:22prom last year you don't know everything about him when we were younger he actually came and lived
23:27with us for a while i would get these nightmares luca would come sleep on my floor promise he'd
23:36protect me that he'd never let anything hurt me all right so he's not a psycho
23:45unfortunately still a playboy
23:50oh look luca you have a stalker oh no i wasn't i bet she has a little crush
24:02how cute shut up ellie i mean i don't blame her but he's taken honey hands off get the fuck off me
24:13daddy jesus christ i told you we're not together
24:15you okay
24:20peachy
24:22hey like i've been saying fuck luca
24:27well don't fuck luca fuck austin but
24:31i'm not just gonna go fuck austin can you stop screaming austin's name
24:36someone say my name
24:38why don't i give you two lovebirds a minute
24:43hey
24:48hey
24:49i've been looking everywhere for you
24:51yeah here i am
24:53here you are
24:54austin i am so sorry about what luca and my idiot brother did to you
25:00it's inexcusable
25:02no no it's okay it's okay really it's not that bad
25:04plus it gives me some street cred
25:06yeah yeah everyone's talking about what a badass you are
25:10yeah that's what i thought so
25:11i actually owe you an apology
25:14i came on way too strong in the library
25:17i just really like you
25:19i couldn't help myself
25:21but i want to do this right
25:24can i take you out
25:27oh
25:29i'll think about it
25:40okay
25:43yo luca i'll be back in an hour
25:58peace bro
25:58hey
26:00what are you doing
26:05what did i say
26:12no more austin
26:15oh fuck off luca
26:18i think i have a role
26:20no ellie
26:22no other girls at all
26:26not here
26:36wait i don't want to hurt you
26:49i'm not scared of you luca
26:52oh
27:03oh
27:04I don't know.
27:34You sure you want this?
27:51I'm sure.
27:53I want you to be my first.
27:54I want you to be my first.
28:01That was...
28:04incredible.
28:06I mean, I knew it would be.
28:08From what I read about it.
28:10It's different in Bloodbound, obviously, because he's a vampire king.
28:18Yeah, of course.
28:23You know...
28:25When you were living with us...
28:28And I got to be around you all the time...
28:31It was the happiest I've ever been.
28:35And I know that's fucked up.
28:37Because it was probably really bad for you.
28:39It wasn't all that bad.
28:43And you.
28:44And your stories, so...
28:50Yo!
28:52Hook up!
28:54Yo, you in there?
29:04Motherfucker.
29:05What the fuck is going on here?
29:07Okay, well, let's just...
29:08Why don't we just...
29:08My sister?
29:10What the hell is wrong with you?
29:11I trusted you, Luca.
29:13I trusted you.
29:14And this is what you do with my trust?
29:16Will, you don't understand.
29:17Stay out of it, Henley!
29:18Stay out of it.
29:19This is my life.
29:20Well, let's just...
29:21You were supposed to help me protect her.
29:23Not go and fuck her yourself!
29:26This whole fucking time, I thought you were my brother.
29:28And all you really wanted was my little sister?
29:30Fuck you.
29:35Piece of shit.
29:38Get out.
29:40Just get out.
29:43Fuck out of here, Luca!
29:44We're done!
29:45I care about her, okay?
29:46Yeah?
29:47Didn't I just see you with your tongue down Ellie's throat?
29:49Two weeks ago at my party!
29:51That was different.
29:52That was then.
29:53Okay, okay, fine.
29:54You care about her?
29:55If you care about her, Luca, leave her the fuck alone!
29:58You think you're good enough for her, you're not!
30:01You think you won't hurt her?
30:03You will!
30:04It's who you are!
30:06You're fucked up, you're violent, and you're selfish.
30:09And I need you to stay the fuck away from my little sister!
30:12Luca, wait!
30:17Yeah.
30:18Yeah, Luca?
30:20Do it.
30:21Do it!
30:22Show her who you really are!
30:24Don't!
30:30Luca, I'm sorry.
30:32I didn't mean for it to end up...
30:33What?
30:34You got what you wanted.
30:35Didn't you?
30:37What?
30:38What are you talking about?
30:39For your book.
30:41What, I show you the ropes and how my job's done, right?
30:46We could just go back to everything being normal.
30:50Why are you being like this?
30:51I thought that you cared.
30:52What did you think was gonna happen, huh?
30:55Did you think we were gonna date?
30:58You were my best friend's little sister.
31:02That's it.
31:07We're done.
31:08I tried to tell you, once a playboy, always a playboy.
31:27Right?
31:28Not the time.
31:31Should've known you'd never go for a girl like me.
31:33Babe, what did I tell you?
31:36You're beautiful.
31:37And funny.
31:39And talented.
31:40And you deserve better.
31:42If he doesn't see that, someone else will.
31:46And I, for one, am not going to let you accept the fate of Virgin Nerd.
31:52Even if only for the sake of your future smart.
31:55Let me tell you something.
31:56The best way to get over someone is to get under someone else.
32:00I think it's time to give Austin a chance.
32:05Put Luca in your rear view, once and for all.
32:11Okay?
32:28Hey, Bookra.
32:28Hey.
32:31I thought about your offer.
32:37I like sushi.
32:40It's my lucky day, huh?
32:43How about I pick you up Saturday?
32:45Around noon?
32:47See you then.
32:47See you then.
32:47What the?
33:03What are you wearing?
33:07You are not dad.
33:08Henley, you back here?
33:14Hey.
33:16Hey, you made it.
33:18Long time no see.
33:19Oh, hell no.
33:21Stop.
33:22You're my brother, not my keeper, okay?
33:24It's my bad, man.
33:25I should have talked to you before I made any kind of move.
33:28It was disrespectful, and I'm sorry.
33:30But I really like your sister.
33:33I mean, I'm not going to ask for permission or anything, but it'd be great to have your blessing.
33:37And these are for you.
33:43Oh, that's very sweet.
33:48She's allergic.
33:50To flowers?
33:51That's what I said.
33:54Don't make me regret this.
34:12That was great.
34:15You literally said that you like sushi.
34:17Okay, but it's because it's a cool girl thing to say.
34:20What was I supposed to say?
34:21I love Olive Garden?
34:22Well, yeah.
34:23Anything that you like is a cool girl thing to like, because you're a cool girl.
34:27Yeah, because spending Friday nights in the library has made me very cool.
34:33Well, thank you for a very gross date.
34:38I hope to never eat raw fish ever again.
34:41Maybe I can make it up to you.
34:45You're beautiful, you know?
34:49I've wanted to do this since the moment I saw you.
34:53It's worth the wait.
35:09Yeah.
35:09Yeah, definitely.
35:14Well, thanks again.
35:16I'll see you around.
35:20See ya.
35:21I need to kick his ass.
35:47It was good.
35:51Yeah, great.
36:03Look, Henley, I know I'm not that.
36:06But with him gone, I'm just trying to look out for you.
36:13Protect you.
36:17You know, as kids, whenever you got hurt, I felt like I got hurt too.
36:24Felt like I let you down.
36:26Like, like I should have stopped it.
36:31I still feel that way.
36:35But, you're old enough to make your own decisions.
36:42So, do you like him?
36:45I do.
36:53Well, I guess that's that.
36:55Well, you're old enough to meet you.
37:07Yeah, go.
37:12Yeah, go.
37:13Go.
37:13Go.
37:14Go.
37:15Go.
37:15Go.
37:15Go.
37:16Go.
37:17Go.
37:17Go.
37:17Go.
37:19Go.
37:19Go.
37:21Go.
37:22Go.
37:23Go.
37:23Go.
37:24Hey, baby.
37:35Baby.
37:36Fucking hell, Ellie. Can you just...
37:39Just leave me alone.
37:43Okay, I...
37:45am really over this.
37:48I get that you're sad about Will or whatever, but...
37:53You haven't fucked me in, like, a month, and I'm sorry, but your girl has needs.
37:59Just go find someone else.
38:02I don't give a shit.
38:17You're fucking kidding me.
38:19Her.
38:21That fucking nerd?
38:23Let's go!
38:24Jesus, Luca, that is low.
38:27Even for you.
38:30No wonder Will hates you.
38:42Shit.
38:45Fucking no way, man.
38:46I didn't talk to you.
38:48No.
38:48Absolutely not.
38:50It's fine.
38:50Just give us a sec.
38:51Look, I meant what I said.
38:59I don't want you hanging around him.
39:03You think you get a say?
39:04Really?
39:05You don't know what he's like.
39:07The things that he says about you.
39:09He's nice to me, okay?
39:11He takes me out.
39:12He bought me flowers.
39:13Yeah, you're allergic.
39:13He doesn't treat me like some little kid.
39:17He doesn't give a shit about you.
39:20He just wants to fuck you and leave.
39:21That's what he's like.
39:23That's what he said at the library.
39:24That's why I hit him.
39:25He's for the point.
39:25Sounds like someone else I know.
39:28All right, man.
39:29It's time you leave my girlfriend alone.
39:31You gotta believe me, kid.
39:38Goodbye, Luka.
39:47You know about this?
39:49You see how that asshole treats your sister?
39:51At least he didn't stab me in the back.
39:56My sister is none of your business.
39:59Got it?
40:01Bring it in, fellas.
40:02I know it's just a crush, crush, crush.
40:18I know it's just a crush, crush, crush.
40:25I know that it's just a crush.
40:30But I always read way too much in this fight.
40:35I can't help what I feel to you.
40:38But fuck, I'm such a little queen.
40:41I know it's just a crush.
40:59Hey.
41:00Easy, Tiger.
41:15I've missed you.
41:16Yeah, since an hour ago.
41:19I mean, I've been thinking about you like crazy.
41:22Yeah.
41:22Yeah.
41:26Why don't we go back into the stacks for some privacy?
41:29Oh.
41:33Well, I'm actually...
41:34I'm working right now.
41:36I just cracked this new chapter.
41:37Okay, but this can wait.
41:40I can't.
41:42Come on.
41:43So, I was thinking maybe you could read a couple of the pages I wrote.
42:05I really like them.
42:06Are you seriously thinking about that right now?
42:09I was kind of hoping I had your full attention.
42:12No, you do.
42:13I just, um...
42:14You said a couple of weeks ago that you wanted to read them, so I...
42:17And I will.
42:20Just an hour now, okay?
42:23Okay.
42:23Okay, that's about as far as I'm willing to go with a librarian in the room.
42:37Come on, it'll be just like that shit you write.
42:39It's not shit, and I said no.
42:41God damn it, Hanley.
42:43What do I have to do, huh?
42:48I'm sorry.
42:49I'm sorry, I just...
42:50I like you a lot.
42:52And I know I've only known you for a few weeks, but I feel like...
42:56I feel like I'm falling in love with you.
42:58You don't...
43:04You don't even know me.
43:07Yes, I do.
43:09Austin, I don't think that this is gonna work out.
43:14You're a fucking tease, huh?
43:18Excuse me?
43:19I mean, I thought this would be easy.
43:22Girls like you are always grateful for a little attention.
43:26Fuck you!
43:27I mean, you come back from summer vacation half a cup size bigger,
43:30and you think it makes you hot shit?
43:32It doesn't.
43:35Well, I am so sorry to have wasted your time.
43:41Uh-uh.
43:42You're not getting away that easy.
43:43No, but get off me!
43:45You heard her.
43:46Get off.
43:53She was mine first, man.
43:55Wait your turn.
43:56You piece of shit.
43:58There he is.
44:00The killer.
44:03No.
44:05That'd be me.
44:06Holy shit.
44:09Ow.
44:10Good.
44:12Good shot.
44:13You learned from the best.
44:16Let's get you out of here.
44:18Don't you ever touch her again.
44:21Yeah, fine.
44:23Yeah, you two belong together.
44:25Fucking psychos.
44:26You okay?
44:44Next time.
44:45Remind me I'm a lover, not a fighter.
44:47You know, I didn't mean what I said.
44:53After.
44:57You're more to me than just Will's sister.
45:05You're everything.
45:06I thought, I thought you didn't think of me like that.
45:14Of course I do.
45:18Henley, I love you.
45:19I've loved you since I was ten years old and I moved in down the hall.
45:27Since you first begged me to push you on the tire swing and read me one of your stories.
45:36Since you held my hand after one of your nightmares.
45:39And you looked at me like I was the only person in the world.
45:53It's always been you.
45:59Why did you push me away then?
46:04Because I'm fucked up.
46:06Hen.
46:07I'm not good for you.
46:10Yes, you are.
46:14When I saw Austin on top of you, I wanted to kill him.
46:18You understand?
46:20You should not be around guys like me.
46:22But you didn't.
46:23You didn't kill him and you still saved me.
46:26You saved yourself.
46:33I love you too, you know.
46:37You do?
46:39Oh my god, Luca.
46:40You really think that was just for research?
46:43I've always loved you.
46:52I missed you.
46:54I missed you too.
46:56I missed you.
47:05Henley!
47:10Hey.
47:11Will, listen to me.
47:13I heard about the library.
47:15Are you okay?
47:18Yeah, mostly.
47:19Hey, man.
47:23You were right about, Allison.
47:27Thank you for protecting her.
47:32Always.
47:35Well, I guess that's that.
47:39Just try to keep the PDA to a minimum, will ya?
47:44That, seriously? That's your blessing?
47:46That's the best you're gonna get, sis.
47:49If you hurt her, you know what happens.
47:53Never again.
48:03Where were we?
48:09I want to see some of you writing.
48:17You're sure?
48:19Yeah.
48:22Yeah.
48:31So, what do you think?
48:43you can be honest i can take it just tell me because it's honestly a first draft and i'm
48:52working on it and it's really good you think so it's really really good
48:59amazing i think so too there's just one thing that
49:06i think you need to work on
49:10what is it
49:12let me show you
49:14okay keep going i need the inspiration yeah
49:40so
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