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    The Philosophy of Vegan Values


    by antishitstem

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    Maynard S. Clark
    IF these are PowerPoint slides, I'd set the paragraphing to have less room between the lines so that the text would be more readable.

    The illustrations are good; it "reads" or runs like a "slide presentation", so I'd bring the text down from the top and up from the bottom, putting less room between the two lines.

    GREAT thoughts.

    Delivery can be improved.

    It gives me ideas on how I'd make a similar video using limited resources.
    By Maynard S. Clark8 years ago