KUDOS TO YOU! Ok, this is pretty good. I have no idea who you are, but this is great. Here's my review of "Icarus"!
First off, let me say that your animation style is very good. I liked how everything just blended, it has to be one of the better flashes I've seen in years. Not to mention the fact that you did it in 3-D. Top notch!
Secondly, I love your twist to this story. It was very good, and I can see where you're comming from. There are dangers about technology, which is what I think you were getting at here. Not to much, not to little. Its very hard to do what you did, I've tried it with Moby Dick to make it so that humans won. Its hard to change a story when it doesn't want to be changed.
I don't think I can ad any criticizm or advice to you, other than this. When you're animating these sequences, don't make it so sharp. Sometimes it's better to make things go slow. Also, get a mike and someone who has that old timer'svoice. It would make it that much better. 10/10
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First off, let me say that your animation style is very good. I liked how everything just blended, it has to be one of the better flashes I've seen in years. Not to mention the fact that you did it in 3-D. Top notch!
Secondly, I love your twist to this story. It was very good, and I can see where you're comming from. There are dangers about technology, which is what I think you were getting at here. Not to much, not to little. Its very hard to do what you did, I've tried it with Moby Dick to make it so that humans won. Its hard to change a story when it doesn't want to be changed.
I don't think I can ad any criticizm or advice to you, other than this. When you're animating these sequences, don't make it so sharp. Sometimes it's better to make things go slow. Also, get a mike and someone who has that old timer'svoice. It would make it that much better. 10/10
c bo, mais pour ma part, je trouve ça sans intérêt de reprendre l'histoire d'Icar en y apportant rien de plus k1 maquillage graphique.
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